Wednesday, April 28, 2010

One cup of Coco.

It was a winter evening outside and white snowflakes fell like leaves on an Autumn day. I could feel the snow hit my face like pieces of sand whipping at my face. The cold temperature made face turn cherry red. I was watching my brother and sister sledding down a hill. The sky slowly turned pitch black and stars started to poke out of the darkness. It was time to go home. Time to have a cup of hot chocolate. I shouted to my brother and sister to start heading home. To be honest my skin felt like it was turning purple. So I ran home with my brother and sister in pursuit.

As I slammed the garage door I felt the warm fireplace heat. My face felt like it was starting to melt form the ice chilling snow. I ran up the stairs waiting for the cup of goodness. As i ran closer to the kitchen i could smell the aroma of baked cookies and hot chocolate. There where two kinds of hot chocolate White and and the classic chocolate. Of course I chose white chocolate. As my mom place a plate of five of those pre-made winter cookies. All you have to do is put the dough n the oven and let them cook for about ten minutes. All my mind could think about is that white cup of white coco. And that's when it happened.......

So I greedily chugged the cup of chocolate and my tongue started to feel a sharp pain of a hundred degree like burning sensation on my tongue. I shrieked in pain like thousand hornets all stinging at once. I then sharply tipped the innocent cup on its side. I could see the burning white liquid pouring on the ground like a waterfall. I was to busy to clean it up. While that happened I was running around the little area of the kitchen like a headless chicken. I was repeatedly fanning my tongue. So I ran to the sink and started to chug down the ice cold water.

So for the rest of the night I slowly ate my cookies. The cookies felt like rock. They still tasted good but hard. I started to form little air bubbles in my tongue. I remade another cup of white coco. This time i let the cup cool in the fridge until cool temperature. I could hear my brother and sister laughing in the living room. My mind felt humiliated and stressed. Thanks to one cup of coco.....

3 comments:

  1. you repated some words like

    So for the rest of the night I slowly ate my cookies for the rest of the night. You reused for the rest of the night

    and this does not make sense

    My brother and sister that i was hurt by a drink. i dont under stand it

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  2. HAHA very nice.Coco dosent get to one hundered degress thats funny though

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  3. Very Awesome!! But needs some editing.

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