Young drivers can be dangerous. Did you know that seven percent of the driving population is young people? Added with that fourteen percent of driving accidents are caused from young drivers! Imagine you driving the car of you're dreams a new driver having the most happiest time of you're life.... Then you suddenly get struck on the passengers side of the car. You suddenly panic and lose control. Imagine the sorrow that people have to go through. I know that in 1999 the price for one death in a vehicle crash was $970,000 and for an injury was $35,000. That money could be used for medical supplies or helping repair roads or clean the water in the lakes and even plant more trees to help the environment. What if we could stop the young driving accidents?
Well to start with i think that one of the ages that would fail at driving is fourteen because 1# because they might not be able to afford the prices of the car insurance or the gas. The only way you would be able to get the money is to get the money yourself by getting a job or you could get a cash full of money from you're mom and dad if you did tons of complaining or crying . But that would be ridiculous because you wouldn't know how to save you're money or at least work for it! My 2# reason is that they would be to busy texting their friends or talking on their new iPhone [ witch would be illegal]! Then it would cause a injury or their life if they crashed. Plus adding to that they might be doing drugs witch they shouldn't be doing anyway and their parents don't even care about them. And with all the dope or all that drug crap they would loose focus instantly.
I think the age that might progress in driving a car is sixteen. Reason number 1# is that they probably might have a job to pay for the car. They would need a car to go to school if the parents don't like driving them to school. Reason 2# is that they would be more mature and trusting to study for the car testing exams or drive to places to get for example like groceries or pick their parents from work. Reason 3# is that they could be more independent to go to the mall to shop or go to the movie theater with their friends. Reason 4# is that it would teach the new driver how to handle car finances and difficulties of owning a car.
The winning age that would be able to drive is eighteen. One reason is that they probably have enough money to get a car. They would have already have started to save money for that kind of things. [I know that personally that I have been saving money for a car or house and all that other kinds of stuff since i was six years old!] Reason 2# is that they would be independent to drive to places they wanted to go to. I think when eighteen they have toe option to drive because they would have probably graduated and progress to a collage. They are pretty much an adult by now. Reason 3# is that They would have more information and wisdom to be able to handle the car insurances and finances.
You're life is like a one piece of glass. Once it shatters you can never find or put back the broken pieces. If you relate it to you're life it is like that. Once it is broken there is no way of puzzleing back the pieces togeather. Now think about how young aged drivers would drive?
Your story was pretty good because you had full explanations for each age. But the best pasrt for me was the ending because it ending with a BANG
ReplyDeleteThe ending was pretty eye opening about the glass good job i like it
ReplyDeletein the begging really use the money for cleaning the lake do not be so green really
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ReplyDeleteI liked how at the end you compaired your life to glass. It was a very good closing. It really gives you something to think about. You did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI think you should state your position again at the end Also, Your message was clear but I think at the begining you should maybe put in a question or something like that. Other than that your story was great.